某機(jī)器人制造公司正在研發(fā)一款輔助師生教與學(xué)的機(jī)器人。該公司征集客戶需求與設(shè)計(jì)創(chuàng)意,先通過(guò)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)開展題為“Classroom Robot”的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn):
1)Classroom Robot將對(duì)我們的教與學(xué)帶來(lái)巨大的變化;
2)你期待Classroom Robot能夠做些什么;
3)你對(duì)Classroom Robot期待的心情。
范文:
Classroom Robot
Classroom robots will come to our classroom. What good news! It will influence our teaching and learning greatly.
In my opinion, I hope the classroom robots can help us in these ways. First, I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed. Second, the classroom robots are also expected to collect our problems for our teachers, because not every student is brave enough to communicate with teachers often. What's more, I hope classroom robots can play with us between classes.
How I hope classroom robots can come to my classroom as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to that day.
解析:
[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí);
③ 提示:根據(jù)提示信息介紹Classroom Robot,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,引出話題,介紹Classroom Robot將對(duì)我們的教與學(xué)帶來(lái)巨大的變化;第二步,你期待Classroom Robot能夠做些什么;
第三步,你對(duì)Classroom Robot期待的心情。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① in my opinion 依我看來(lái)
② communicate with 和某人交流
③ as soon as 一……就
[高分句型]
① What good news!(感嘆句)
② I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句以及so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句)
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