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假定你是李華,你的英國朋友 David 準備參加以 "保護野生動物"為主題的海報設計大賽,現(xiàn)就參賽作品初稿征求你的意見.請回復郵件,內容包括:1.提出存在的問題;2.提出修改建議。
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Dear David,
Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on "Protecting Wildlife", I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.
Your design seems to lack a message that can motivate people to take action.
Additionally, the quality of the images and the cluttered layout need to be improved.
Therefore, I suggest you use a concise and convincing message and high-quality images relevant to the theme. Meanwhile, you’d better simplify the layout by removing some unnecessary elements that distract attention from the message.
I hope my feedback is helpful. Best of luck with your design.
Yours,
Li Hua
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